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紫玖島 sponsored 500coins for Issue 89!
謝謝兔兔的心得～


用廣東話解讀王跟黃是我完全沒想過的事情，原來這麼剛好取到一樣發音，真是太有趣了！我好喜歡這樣的巧合！


本篇的確很短，用來訓練我在極簡短文字中，專注寫兩個主角之間的情感發展，確實沒有著重在背景描述上，兔兔給了好建議，或許我真的可以重新修稿後，擴寫成中長篇，來個追妻火葬場是個超讚想法！

我也希望跟兔兔的親戚一樣，讓小蟲跟阿增結婚～
6 months agoReply
凝雨
謝謝打賞！🐰😘
原來這部作品是為了訓練用極短文字表達主角感情發展嗎？有時間我也想做這種訓練呢！

咦？妳也覺得「追妻火葬場」很棒嗎？太好了！🐰❤️ 一說結婚，也許妳可以寫一個他們結婚的番外呢！（被打飛~
6 months agoReply
凝雨
@紫玖島
6 months agoReply
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