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耀西係一隻龜 sponsored 1888coins for Issue 89!
4 months agoReply
林墨
感謝打賞！新年快樂！
4 months agoReply
耀西係一隻龜
這算是我在這平台第一篇追完的長篇小說，雖然中間因一些事斷追了好一段時間，心裡一直掛念著還沒有看到結局，終於有時間好好看完了～～～文筆很厲害，尤其是戰爭場面的描寫，完全讓人走進那個弱肉強食的叢林時代。雖然故事結束了，但他們依然活在讀者的心中。恭喜你完成了一部優秀的作品～～～
4 months agoReply
林墨
謝謝一路以來的支持。
我自己也知道，這部作品缺點很多。像是主題冷門、氣氛沉悶壓抑、一點也不爽、亂改歷史。
我也時常檢視自己，接納各種批評跟建議，希望能創作出更好的作品來。
總之，非常感謝你支持這個作品。
4 months agoReply
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