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hanchuan
這一章寫的很好。看完這一章，我有個想法，其實我忍了幾天了，現在忍不住要說出來：我想看更多作者有關人性的觀察及描述（肉文量少一點沒關係），我相信會很精采、更有意思。這個故事中那些有關人性的描述是吸引我看下去的原因。我覺得作者有潛力將這個故事寫出石頭記的感覺，不過現在它是以金瓶梅的樣式呈現岀來。而我個人比較喜歡看人性的描述，所以忍不住想要跟作者反應一下。沒有不尊重作者的創作理念的意思。
2 years agoReply
日暮
您用字遣詞好客氣，其實我自己沒特別感覺自己的人性描述很特別，或許是我一直在人來人往的餐飲業。會是肉文的原因也是因為覺得性本身很深刻，而慾望會影響一個人的呈現。在我心中，金瓶梅裡面很多真性情，也很市井小民，我自己蠻喜歡的。

其實這部有前傳，但我覺得自己寫得不好。會再修改以後再放上來

2 years agoReply
hanchuan
您的故事中人性的描述實際也深刻，我覺得滿難得的。期待看前傳。
2 years agoReply
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