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祿思Luz
恩！情緒的描寫我還沒掌握好
場景的部分我會再改進，不要太過累贅
可能是我喜歡電影感，因為我之前接觸到有讀者反饋給我說比較沒有想像力，需要依靠文字去描繪形狀
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
的確很有電影的感覺，我覺得看電影時很容易忽略一點：電影直接給了觀眾影像與動作（表情），但小說沒有，所以角色描寫的部分確實很重要！
哈哈我也喜歡看電影，常常邊看邊想說怎麼描寫這個角色……
3 months agoReply
祿思Luz
@晨星．死神, 真的！
總有「 魚與熊掌不可得兼」 的感觸
我以前描寫角色的筆墨太重，以至於沒有給讀者留下想像空間XDD
3 months agoReply
祿思Luz
感謝大大的鼓勵和用心～～
讓我更有信心寫下去～～
很開心能得到如此收穫
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
很高興你喜歡！
謝謝參加書評，希望建議都有幫助到你，還增加了你寫作的動力～
3 months agoReply
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