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W.H.
感謝參與～

請問一下：這個「舊情詩」，是「舊」的情詩，還是「舊情」的詩？純屬好奇。

第三行的「風乾」和「舊」呼應，所以我猜是「舊情」的情詩？
2 years agoReply
卯金加刀子
是的，刻意取的名字「舊情詩」。

前兩句曾是埋在心裏的情愫，久久不敢訴說的舊心思，第三句寫出確實是舊情，所以可以是舊的情詩，也作舊情的詩。說是後者的話，或許能理解的感覺來得更強烈吧^°^！
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@卯金加刀子,謝謝解說^^
2 years agoReply
卯金加刀子
@W.H.,不客氣
2 years agoReply
紫小絢
哇嗚～好浪漫(♡˙︶˙♡)
2 years agoReply
眞室邇
酸澀吧( ･᷄ὢ･᷅ )
2 years agoReply
紫小絢
@眞室邇, 雖然過去了，但這告白超浪漫欸
2 years agoReply
卯金加刀子
@紫小絢, 他是個大男人，記憶中這是唯一一句甜言吧
2 years agoReply
卯金加刀子
@眞室邇, 曾經的酸澀都拿去釀酒了(⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠
2 years agoReply
紫小絢
@卯金加刀子, 真的是很讓人心動的告白呀^^確實值得珍藏。
2 years agoReply
卯金加刀子
@紫小絢,對⁠(⁠˘⁠⌣⁠˘⁠ ⁠)！
2 years agoReply
眞室邇
@卯金加刀子,陳舊佳釀XD
2 years agoReply
卯金加刀子
@眞室邇,長情一點可能釀起來、風乾掉之後，都捨不得動（？
2 years agoReply
眞室邇
@卯金加刀子, 可能已經過了最佳日期XD
2 years agoReply
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