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恒河
十號擂台有兩個人
一至九號擂台各有一個台主
咁唔係應該有十一個人咩?


3 years agoReply
阿暖
講得好，我改人「各人」吧
3 years agoReply
恒河
@阿暖,但係牽一髮動全身, 你下一章係 《十對一》, 仲有唔少地方係十個點點點
3 years agoReply
阿暖
@恒河, 我OK的，如你好心幫我列出，我會儘可能改掉。但反過來想，我覺得將「十對一」想成「十面擂台的擂主們對一」其實也沒有全錯。但當然改掉是更理想。
3 years agoReply
恒河
@阿暖,我嘗試過當有十一個人對一個咁改. 但係回合數, 倍數好似會亂晒 
3 years agoReply
阿暖
@恒河, 我會用自己文字理順一下，你為我勾出要改的部份已很感激。 
3 years agoReply
阿暖
@恒河, 我在83章讓刑天少挨了一個回合，這樣回合數和倍率就不需要改了。
3 years agoReply
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