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彗星
沈佳珣和徐靖玄是同陣線的啊？
還有小孩子那部分怎麼看不太懂QQ
1 year agoReply
拾弦
他們同陣線一段時間了哦，具體是因為什麼原因可以看31.（下）那裡，雖然還有其他原因的加成，但他們的同盟其實挺牢固的。

小孩子那邊其實就是謝臨峻做的清醒夢，夢到小時候和小可愛（也就是以前的徐靖玄）發生的事情，不過因為是清醒夢所以才說是「做了開心的夢」。
1 year agoReply
彗星
@拾弦,文筆真的讚欸......不像我寫出的幼稚文XDDD
1 year agoReply
拾弦
@彗星,
謝謝誇獎！

不過我覺得文字沒有幼稚或成熟的差別啦，只要多看些東西多把它運用出來，總有一天彗星大大一定也能對自己的文字自豪的；；
1 year agoReply
彗星
@拾弦,有難度www......
1 year agoReply
拾弦
@彗星,
沒事www 
說不定以後就會好起來了；；
1 year agoReply
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