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我為九斗米折腰 sponsored 100coins for Issue 80!
恭喜優醬！終於擺脫創造主的魔爪了，可喜可賀！
3 months agoReply
凌步
謝謝你唷折腰！

創造主的魔爪是我嗎（？
3 months agoReply
JK
好喜歡你對環境的描繪，完全感覺到那種氛圍
4 months agoReply
凌步
那真的太好了！這也算是我的風格，著墨很多在環境描繪，也有人會覺得太過多餘呢。對我而言，環境描繪、渲染氣氛等等非常的重要，就像電影的開場，讓讀者沉浸進故事裡。

所以，妳能說喜歡，我真的很高興呀！
4 months agoReply
孤蒼寰 sponsored 100coins for Issue 80!
恭喜小優！小優能夢想成真真心不易。
而且這一章她呈現出來的少女感真的超強啊！
4 months agoReply
凌步
哎呀，謝謝你呀！ ٩(ˊᗜˋ)و

那就好了，畢竟是19歲的少女呀！我特別喜歡掛星星燈的那一段～
4 months agoReply
孤蒼寰
@凌步,我最喜歡抱枕那段，自己抱住那一下真的超少女的
4 months agoReply
凌步
@孤蒼寰, 恩恩！來到這邊，小優終於開始好好的做一個少女～
4 months agoReply
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