I think the info dump about the gun is a little too long. You could give the main summary of how it works but it’s best to saven the history of it for a more relevant time, and if there is no relevant time to bring it up, maybe there’s no need to tell the reader. Some things the author should know, but the reader doesn’t have to know for the sake of the story.
Other than that though, I liked this issue and am eagerly waiting for the next one. (Also Lucas is back yay!)
Other than that though, I liked this issue and am eagerly waiting for the next one. (Also Lucas is back yay!)