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薑毛辣椒
一如既往人與劍的故事！而且都是悲劇結局啊......
好吧！這樣還是很好看XD(存心想看角色被虐的讀者)

只是這篇有很多地方，我會因為不知道劍在稱呼的人是誰而停頓，沒有讀得很順。
4 years agoReply
夢塵
好看就好XDDD其實我猶豫了好一陣子要用甚麼視角寫，不過還是武器的視角好發揮啊www悲劇結局嘛～都是套路，套路XDDD

基本上主人與「她」指的都是柳夢秋（女）
「他」大多都是指巫殿殿主羋虛

然後我簡單的修了一次，可能現在看會比較順了（？
4 years agoReply
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