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roseofnoonvale
Playing the role of Sarah to get the information she needs. Smart move
9 years agoReply
EnnaStark
She's good at manipulating people... she'll try anything to get what she needs. I think she'd be a Slytherin...
9 years agoReply
roseofnoonvale
@EnnaStark, yes, a slytherin
9 years agoReply
Faithios
Wow, I'm surprised she would still call him Daddy after what he put her through.
9 years agoReply
EnnaStark
She was trying to charm him into giving her the information in order to save someone's life. She knew it would work because he called her Sarah still. He wasn't cold toward her so she decided to call him that because it would be easier to manipulate him that way. It pissed Sterling off to no end but what are you going to do. She was doing that, but I feel that a small part still feels like she's part of his family (a microscopic part but a part nonetheless).
9 years agoReply
Faithios
@EnnaStark, Oh okay, I get it. :)
9 years agoReply
EnnaStark
@Faithios, although I did hesitate to write that part because it might cause confusion... Was it alright with context?
9 years agoReply
Faithios
@EnnaStark, Well, it's perfectly understandable to me now, but mentioning her motives in the text after she says it might be a good idea. But you don't have to, since other readers might be more perceptive than I was. XD
9 years agoReply
EnnaStark
@Faithios, alright! I'll probably try to finish the entire story first, then go back and edit it, but that's been noted!
9 years agoReply
Faithios
@EnnaStark, Sounds good to me. :)
9 years agoReply
EnnaStark
@Faithios, I've written the end but I need to add more to fill the story out more, so it should be finished pretty soon!
9 years agoReply
Faithios
@EnnaStark, I didn't know you were that close to the end. Can't wait to see how it pans out. :)
9 years agoReply
EnnaStark
@Faithios, yep! I just finished the story... It makes me a bit sad actually...
9 years agoReply
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