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我覺得可以≧∇≦
7 years agoReply
天也
我也覺得可以，因為是我寫的。就算沒人看的懂我寫得，我還是最了解自己。
7 years agoReply
@天也,我也看懂了，其實（莫名開心）
7 years agoReply
天也
@貓咪的小倉鼠,你看的懂我也很開心。
7 years agoReply
@天也,嗯嗯，加油加油，一起
7 years agoReply
天也
@貓咪的小倉鼠,好的
7 years agoReply
夏初
人稱的部分有點看不太懂呢··
有妳、她跟名字(((混亂
7 years agoReply
天也
其實我也有一點搞混了。

用妳其實是在跟內心說話。

用她是在講述動作給你看。

名字則都有可能。

但這篇的視角是第一人稱，對！（其實我也不確定）
7 years agoReply
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