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林忠廷
好的
8 years agoReply
冷水
呃，這故事有點看不太懂。
人物的身份背景之類的可以在開頭稍微帶過一點，這樣可以讓讀者更深入其境些。

感謝你帶來的文章，如果有什麼想說的也歡迎到我的留言版上留言哦！
8 years agoReply
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