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林慕水
6/3來修文了～
劇情沒變，人設沒變，只是多了幾句銜接；沒有特意描寫情愫或渲染氛圍。

然後，總感覺，一直修文，連對這篇文章的感性都修掉了→我現在看不出來好壞，希望它一切正常（掩面

*《費馬數論》是我掰的
*第１、第３則不是同人文，只是借用了人名（還有司康、紅茶、藍色眼睛）
*目前想說的是這樣。希望不會連留言（作者的話）都要增修ＸＤ
1 month agoReply
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