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南嶺笑笑生
點題了，好像隱若能猜測之後的劇情（這亦是作者希望的吧？）。

第二章深入描寫（母親、姊姊）或帶出了新人物（柳醫生）。一開始的夢境（母子互動）和之後的夢醒；加上「詩」對悠的意義，加上他仍未說出口的秘密；感覺蠻有張力的。

個人很喜歡「母子互動」（夢），病房相處維持一貫的表面輕鬆愉快內裡壓抑的氣氛，期待下章有病房外的不同情境展開。
8 months agoReply
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