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十把槍
簡潔有力的作品，但我說實在，有趣

名為自由的奴隸，一輩子找尋自由的同時也在奴役自己，我相信，里奧沒有結束的一天，事實上，如果他願意，可以冒充成衛兵的。

劇情：80分
角色：60分
創意：70分
特殊：88分（留白在循環處）
均分：74.5
7 months agoReply
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謝謝大大

依我看，如果里奧真的敢裝扮衛兵，那肯定是一場脫離舒適圈的大行動
7 months agoReply
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