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伐伐伐木工
是說，你的人物插畫都很精美，給你個拇指!
9 months agoReply
子不語
感謝～～我沒有插畫就寫不出東西 XD
9 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
10篇的話ok的，其實全篇也可以，
另外會一篇整條評，另一篇會給想要往哪個方向復評，比如劇情、人物塑造、矛盾等等，把最想知道的點說出來，會更能聚焦喔
9 months agoReply
子不語
我想要人物塑造方向的評論，感謝！
9 months agoReply
子不語
那就不好意思，請審查全篇二十八回。這樣人物的arc會比較明顯。
9 months agoReply
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