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凜冬
一、吸引！因為互動式很酷，像在玩遊戲
二、亞維恩，因為我是主角派🤣
三、很特別的機制，支持！
四、設定很特別，並且文筆描寫極佳，完全能想像畫面！
10 months agoReply
商澐
之前選擇過，看了一點點，我覺得一段可以再短一點，太長讀起來會有點累，描寫的部分挺豐滿的
10 months agoReply
潔爾狄
謝謝您的建議！寫著寫著就忍不住爆字數......我來試試看是否能夠拆分，感恩！
10 months agoReply
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