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黑靈
所以女主是真心喜歡男主的，能感受到男主的遺憾。這是一個悲劇。
1 year agoReply
老謝
幸好結尾是二人在死後世界相會
1 year agoReply
ฅMahiru久暖ฅ
我覺得文靜嘉去世時
主角傷痛的描寫可以再多一點
當下聽到的心情丫什麼的
感覺會更能體會主角的心情
後半段覺得有點倉促
沒辦法很好躂共情 但是已經寫躂很好啦~
還我眼淚丫作者QAQ
哭爆😭😭
1 year agoReply
老謝
把眼淚還你
1 year agoReply
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