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清夢
真的，求書評然後真的認真說了可以怎麼改進又不聽，只聽讚美，然後覺得自己很厲害。

我也沒多厲害，但是看到標點符號、形容詞亂飛亂用（還堅決不聽任何建議）的就覺得，他們好像太過自信了。
1 year agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
唉，很多人都這樣（
1 year agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
推一個新手村的自信😂
（通常下場都很慘
1 year agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
他們需要見到現實的殘酷（
1 year agoReply
kelcat
(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ　
小臨臨，我來了！
1 year agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
歡迎光臨XD
1 year agoReply
桜流
哈哈哈，來自新手莫名的自信XD
感謝參與~
1 year agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
嗯w
1 year agoReply
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