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夜晨
覺得兩個人之間的對話好有愛，很簡單直率，學生時期就該有這樣的對話。
相對應的是面對社會、面對生活時女主所感受到的疲憊，我想可能也是因為調性跟追求的目標早就跟兩人還住一起時不一樣了吧？
雖然讀了幾次，我從內文中還是不太清楚為什麼女主會變成一個人生活，但那種日復一日的時間流轉所帶來的悲傷與絕望感可以深有體會……

最後，感謝參與這次的創作挑戰！(⁠｢⁠`⁠･⁠ω⁠･⁠)⁠｢
2 years agoReply
YUAN
女主角會變成自己一人是因為對方過世了，從文中跟隨前往極樂淨土可以推斷。

不過死亡原因在文中沒有特別提，比較想寫一個綜觀、比較容易讓人共感的方式，同時也不希望被太聚焦在對方的死因上（不過在寫時是假設在胰臟癌末期或是車禍這種告別時間偏短的原因）

感謝你們舉辦這活動與用心地閱讀留言。

2 years agoReply
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