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眞室邇
黑眼睛和黑眸是不是一個意思？
3 years agoReply
W.H.
黑眼鏡應該是墨鏡～
3 years agoReply
眞室邇
@W.H.,XDDD我改了
3 years agoReply
W.H.
@Tey,哈哈，黑眸＝黑眼睛，無誤，只是「黑眼睛」和後面3句押韻；而「黑眸凝定」比較有古風感～

(有時，在詩裡的重複用字，為的是營造某種節奏)
3 years agoReply
眞室邇
@W.H.,原來如此
3 years agoReply
滔江社
雨前龍井你最愛喝的茶（不懂茶的我：什麼是雨前龍井）
3 years agoReply
W.H.
是一種茶的名稱～

[關於雨前龍井]

https://www.jendow.com.tw/wiki/%E9%9B%A8%E5%89%8D%E9%BE%8D%E4%BA%95
3 years agoReply
東加豆
謝謝你剛才的提點, 我刪除了解(雨後)..嘻嘻~~
3 years agoReply
W.H.
這首就真的是剛剛寫的詩，總覺得我那首圖象詩太敷衍了(3秒鐘完成)，所以補交一首。

結果發現，好像沒有實體的雨。

但，心中的雨，淅淅瀝瀝下不停啊⋯⋯
3 years agoReply
W.H.
這首詩是受到《步步驚心》的啟發～

(我小說和電視劇都不只看了一遍，btw，我最喜歡十三爺)

第8章 Get ！
3 years agoReply
晴空下的雨
步步驚心棒啊....她的雲中歌也很好看，我被虐的死去活來。
3 years agoReply
W.H.
@希言DL,這種戲真的好虐～
3 years agoReply
眞室邇
步步驚心，我看過一次，需要再看一次嗎？
3 years agoReply
W.H.
@Tey,因人而異，我現在應該不會再看了吧^^、
3 years agoReply
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