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Ernest_Scribbler

Moryuu is a very intriguing character. May I mention him in my latest chapter? Or "must" he remain undercover? I have my draft nearly ready to publish :-)

4 years agoReply

Great chapter 👍 Finally, we get to see Moryuu!

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

1. You ever play Metal Gear Solid? Theres this sound that the alerted guards make when they get suspicious.... Every time i say "!" I heard that noise in my head and started laughing like a fool.
2. I forgot there was colored text! That threw me WAAAAY off 😅
3. Who was Moryuu discussing with? Who was throwing the bricks?!
4. Oh man. Cordis is gonna be mad that Jayden got away.
5. I'm excited to see Moryuu finally in the story! Welcome 🤙

4 years agoReply

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1. I never played it but I know the sound.

2. Yeah, I don't know why that later part stayed all orange.

3. Doll Giver = Brick thrower.

4 years agoReply

Stardust Illustrations

Oh no, senshi’s wings :0 poor thing. Also good chapter!

4 years agoReply

Blankmarks

Tell me if messed up in grammar, story consistency or over stepped my bounds with some characters.

I hope the wait for Moryuu lived up to your expectation.

4 years agoReply

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