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筆仔
蘇蓉_妙招

這篇腦袋只有刀光劍影
2 years agoReply
草沙
來也匆匆，去也匆匆，恨不得相逢~~~~
2 years agoReply
阿掌
不知道是不是我會錯意，「林泉蓄力已久，刀上的血腥味已經瀰漫整個廣場」，那釣叟陳生還沒發現還得用神識把廣場掃一遍才發現？
2 years agoReply
草沙
嗯......重複看後的確有點衝突......我再想想怎麼改這段

紀錄:需修改72~76細節!

感恩阿掌!
2 years agoReply
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