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小豬瑩瑩 sponsored 500coins for Issue 75!
首先要多謝阿紫的喜歡，祖母對仲明的不喜歡原於常勇不是她的親生兒子，屬於嫡母迫害庶子，因為這文是輕鬆風格，加上後期會有很多謀略鬥來鬥去，故用旁白來盡快交待，好處是讀者們盡快明白發生什麼事，或是一些笑點，但是壞處就失去文字式的浸透，沒有了細膩感，選了輕鬆的風格，所以就捨了較嚴謹的筆觸。
7 months agoReply
紫玖島
原來如此！我是不是還沒看到那0.0
關於撰寫方式我了解了，沒有覺得不好，反而覺得讀起來別有另一番風味，會很期待後面的故事會怎樣發展呢～
7 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
@紫玖島,謝謝喜歡呀！
7 months agoReply
紫玖島
@小豬瑩瑩來啦！
7 months agoReply
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