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橘柚
說說我自己看法。

那個標點符號......，可能我比較在意。
然後視角問題，有時分不清是誰在說話，動作表情比較少。
以上是我的小拙見。
1 year agoReply
陽壽木魚
感謝建議，我試著在之後改一改
1 year agoReply
陽壽木魚
大好人，感謝～！！
1 year agoReply
月卿言
讓我康康
1 year agoReply
月卿言
呀~
1 year agoReply
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