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杏言
為什麼是最快的一次，因為這篇夠短嗎XDDD
我有時候很多贅字冗詞，謝謝你指出這一點。
至於長篇，我也不是沒有嘗試過，只是寫得像屎一樣根本不想放出來丟自己的臉。這篇本來的規劃也是長篇連載校園愛情，重寫好幾次都覺得很難看，結果才這樣子壓成短篇。（然後也沒寫多好）
謝謝你的評文和鼓勵，好開心！
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
一方面是因為短篇沒錯啦（我沒有嫌棄的意思）,我也讀得滿順。
如果想寫長篇有遇到困難,可以來問我喔～
我比較擅長寫長篇,如果不嫌棄的話☆⌒(*^-゜)v
雖然不是寫愛情
3 months agoReply
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