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凜羽
謝謝小幽靈的心得，這部作品是我初期寫的，所以情節和用字方面會顯得突兀和不順暢。

關於霸凌者的猖狂，因為設定上鳴海是個戰力天花板，所以他們是無法對他下手，只能轉而針對彌樹（小凪）
不過我寫的時候因為不忍心再虐她，結果變成這些霸凌者的定位像是隻紙片老虎，謝謝小幽靈的建議，鴨鴨會試着修改一下🥰🥰

至於這些惡人的懲罰，正如小幽靈所說，是顧及到有些讀者可能無法承受太血腥的過程，所以用詞方面有些斟酌，不過修稿時我可能稍微調整一下，寫得更重口味一點😆😆😆😆
（近期YT影片不知為何提起《豚鼠系列》，我看完部分解說後覺得太變態了，或許可以參考一下）
7 months agoReply
月穎靈
變態起來！（興奮
7 months agoReply
凜羽
@月穎靈, 好XDD (磨拳擦掌ing
7 months agoReply
月穎靈
@凜羽來啦鴨鴨！
7 months agoReply
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