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阿雀
@揆西
1 year agoReply
揆西
非常感謝點評！！

沒有將恐怖氛圍維持下去，這個部分被你一說，我也覺得很可惜，哈哈。

因為我一開始劇情和結尾的設計，就不是一個恐怖故事，而是一個有點絕望的故事xD

至於……樓上聽到的到底是什麼聲音，可能是建築物的聲音吧，這在我家還是個未解之謎，所以我也不想寫的太恐怖，這樣我自己會很毛XDD
1 year agoReply
阿雀
@揆西,如果一開始就決定這是一個有點絕望而不是恐怖故事，我覺得不用可惜啦，這代表你非常清楚自己想寫的是甚麼，這是一件好事。

至於樓上的聲音，對我來說也一直是一個未解之謎xdd
1 year agoReply
揆西
彈珠客與你同在！(鞠躬
1 year agoReply
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