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不勝丸
「阿彌陀佛」www有點好笑
不過，要是甚麼都能退讓的話，那也太可憐了吧！
1 year agoReply
W.H.
這些古代「金句」根本是「矜 (持) 句」吧～

現代人，吃這一套的，應該不多了。

我是故意寫得有點嘲諷啦～
1 year agoReply
W.H.
對我來說，寫下這組〈吐嘈名言・眉批〉，代表我終於「敢」在作品裡寫下粗話 (coarse language)，這應該是我寫作的某種進化。

其實，也有挑戰傳統美學的意味⋯⋯
3 years agoReply
李誠金
@W.H.,試試新風格也不錯，看到後面越來越想笑。
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@李誠金,這個偶一為之，可以，但寫多了，人會越來越歪⋯⋯不過我本來就歪歪的啦～哈哈！
2 years agoReply
李誠金
@W.H.,歪歪？不會啦(◔⊖◔)
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@李誠金,哈哈，你這個圖好可愛！

「歪歪」是指不聽從權威，很有自己的想法；我是正直的人，但不太受教 (特別是無法說服我的老掉牙的東西)，所以我才會寫出這樣的詩——但我高中時，還很乖就是了。
2 years agoReply
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