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Kai is stupid!?
I mean who doesn't know what gay means?
Dumb writing decision.
Good character development would be to have Kai think gay people are bad because of his parents raising him that way. So then Daffodil would teach and persuade him that there's nothing wrong with it and that he's not a bad person because of it.
And Kai would learn and grow as a character. Its called character development.
But hey.
Having him cry every 3 entries is cool too I guess...
HE LOOKS SO GOOD!!!
Kai, my baby, you look all grown up!