What you need currently is not writing, but buying a book about story telling, like 'Save the Cat!', read it through and rethink what is the difference between your story and the content mentioned in the textbook.
I do have one, 'On writing and worldbuilding' by Timothy Hickson.(he has a youtube channel called Hello Future Me.) It certainly is gold, been helpful all the way.
然後按「加至主畫面」
It certainly is gold, been helpful all the way.
或許這樣會很累，可是人生在世，本就是不讓未來的自己感到遺憾比較重要~