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蕓沫
只有我沉菊聯想到陳菊嗎😂
6 years agoReply
葉璇藍
很不錯喔
可惜篇幅有點短，感情沒有完全的表達出來，兩人的相處部分我覺得可以再多增加一點，比如為什麼女生會先逝，或是曾經他們的相處如何，這些都可以幫助情感的傳遞喔～
6 years agoReply
Dream walker
其實主要是想以最後兩個字發揮XDDD
6 years agoReply
葉璇藍
@Dream walker ,原來如此啊
6 years agoReply
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