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Wendy，Dani，Brian
感覺像是開頭，事端的起因之一www
看完影集《獵魔士》之後看這篇還蠻有感的，只是有些短，少了些滂礡的戰事感覺，但爭奪土地權益這點我還蠻喜歡的:-D謝謝參加\^O^/
6 years agoReply
瀧介
我也覺得短短的，應該要加點戰爭元素進入才對
6 years agoReply
Wendy，Dani，Brian
@瀧介,還可以修改的喔XDDD因為比賽還沒結束哈哈哈
6 years agoReply
瀧介
@Wendy，Dani，Brian,好喔
6 years agoReply
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