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Andrew Knight
Finally got to the end. Great, but rough, and that's not entirely a bad thing It's funny that you mentioned rushing the story, because, unfortunately, that's exactly how I felt in these last two chapters. Now, I'm not familiar with your intentions as a writer, but I read everything as if it's the draft of a novel on its way to a publisher. With that in mind, there's definitely some basic improvement to be made here that can take it to the next level... this story has great potential, it just needs a nudge in the right direction, I'd say. You have great skills as a writer already, I think you could get even better!
EnnaStark
Wow, thank you! I've been working on the story slowly but surely (I've been rather busy with stuff). I occasionally stop in the middle of a chapter and pick it up when I find more time, which might be part of the reason it's choppy in places. My intentions as a writer are basically work on bettering my skills right now, then once I've graduated college, try to send off a draft of something to a writing magazine or a publisher if I can get a contract. My dream is to be an author so right now it's just trying to grow into a better writer that can have a compelling story that gets published and possibly even onto the bestseller list (of course that's a dream and probably won't happen for a while). But thank you for the compliment! I do tend to rush things (my story Fall into Silence is evidence of that) but I've been trying to put on the brakes a bit and take time to develop characters and let the plot develop.
Andrew Knight
I can tell you have a lot of ideas you just want to get out there, and I think thats great! I've even done a few blog posts on slowing down as a writer because i used to be just as eager of a writer, I look forward to reading something of yours when you find your optimal rythym
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