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北海沙丁魚
感覺第一段可以分成兩三段，不要擠在一起。
目前章節段落都能很輕鬆閱讀，繼續加油呀～
2 months agoReply
Eason
好的!
2 months agoReply
老七101
感覺他女友也應該有點問題。
2 months agoReply
Eason
我應該是不會寫到連他的女友都背叛他的地步啦......
2 months agoReply
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