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藏在酒裡的檸檬 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 7!
謝謝點評🥹🥹🙏🏻🙏🏻
5 months agoReply
菜根
感謝打賞XD 祝寫作順利=v=~
5 months agoReply
藏在酒裡的檸檬
先謝謝評語ෆ˙ᵕ˙ෆ
噢……那個，不是忘記了哈哈哈哈哈
是我本來打算設定成，女主只認出在便利商店的少年=她爸爸女朋友的兒子
但並沒有認出在巷子裡的人跟便利商店是同一人xD
（打完發現好繞口）
想說當時光線昏暗+女主並不知道自己的錢包具體掉在哪個地方，這樣設定應該挺合理的，也能順便偷懶（？）一下為後面的感情線稍微鋪一下路哈哈哈哈
不過這樣看看，好像其實也不太合理笑死
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然後女老師+老許確實是修稿後的新一條感情線！！
小女孩不能劇透太多xD但她是重要角色
高鐵那個只能算是NPC哈哈哈哈哈
5 months agoReply
菜根
好的，小說家有注意到就好~
5 months agoReply
菜根
你的有更新喔~在看看有沒有什麼問題?
5 months agoReply
菜根
@藏在酒裡的檸檬  1/17 開始進行~
5 months agoReply
藏在酒裡的檸檬
大感謝🥹🥹🫶🏻🫶🏻
看到進步有點感動餒XDD有種下的決心被認可的感覺
當初真的在修稿v.s管他的完結再說猶豫很久
畢竟二十萬字真的太難放棄了哈哈哈哈
5 months agoReply
菜根
@藏在酒裡的檸檬, 不客氣，結局走向已經出來了，所以要修稿是可以修的。除非結局走向還沒出來，那樣了話才會不建議修稿。前兩章詳細評語大概是這樣~其他明天繼續~
5 months agoReply
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