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Victoria Hartzell

The tension in this scene was incredible! Did you already know how this conflict would resolve, or are you discovering it as you go?

3 months agoReply

elsaa_watson

I genuinely enjoyed reading your story. Your storytelling, pacing, and emotional weight are impressive, and it’s clear how much care you’ve put into it. While reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how well this story would work as a visual format like a comic or webtoon. I’m a professional commissioned artist specializing in adapting stories into expressive visuals, and I believe your work has great potential in that form. I’d love to connect and discuss a possible collaboration.

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5 months agoReply

Luna Wright

This story was a wild and gripping ride the mix of supernatural horror and human emotion made it feel like a cinematic thriller. I loved how Frank’s bravery and haunted past tied into the chaos of the Ghost Express, it really kept me on edge till the end. I’m curious though, did you mean for Frank’s survival to be a second chance, or more of a curse after everything he went through?

6 months agoReply

Showmation

Good Question very good I had originally asked myself this one to myself writing the finale. Kind of similar to an earlier comment by someone named Josephine in this same chapter in different wording. My response was to his/her/their/its question, "Was his death tragedy or peace he was searching for?", with "I believe the audience can make up their own answer to that". Your question kinda differs a bit though asking about second chance or curse of his past, my response...

I can confidentally say canon wise it's a second chance but if people want it to be said a curse it can be but I as the one who made it believe it to be second chance you can believe the ogriginal intent or take it in your own way.

6 months agoReply

Luna Wright

@Showmation, Thanks for the explanations, I really love the way you write and think i really appreciate it! I have thoughts about your story i want to share it with you. Which platform would you like to chat easily? Insta or email?

6 months agoReply

Showmation

I believe this question is the mystery like of how movies like Crawl ends, the audeince gets to make the answer.

7 months agoReply

Josephine

was his death a tragedy, or the peace he’d been searching for all along?

7 months agoReply

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