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陽壽木魚
這個主角來頭不小啊，連義父都是三王之一ww
8 months agoReply
楠都月
真的很日輕和日漫的感覺呢。 挺有趣的開頭，已書籤！
9 months agoReply
羽璇
義父是三王之一阿......可是為什麼唯獨主角會被收留，而且剛好能力又強到需要有戒指壓制.....感覺很不平凡阿

車上的同學們感覺都是不好惹的人物
一到站馬上就有事件啦！
果然，這就是主角光環嘛！
9 months agoReply
深淵
☺️對的，至於你提到的一些疑問這個在後續劇情也會提到，但我最近打算開始改一下前面的章節大概1-7章，因為我發現有一些漏洞。
9 months agoReply
原子能
世界觀鋪陳得不錯，暗族、三大主神、意念能力…聞到了宏大背景的味道。父子關係的刻劃很細膩，寥寥幾句就把那種關心又不能明說的感覺寫出來了。希望後續能保持這種敘事水平，不要變成單純的戰鬥升級文。
9 months agoReply
洛々ka
題材很好，主角擁有的能力比其他人要強大很多，看看未來這個外掛會開得怎麼樣
10 months agoReply
深淵
感謝支持，我會讓他慢慢適應這股力量，而這部分力量有機會的話我會在前傳說明
10 months agoReply
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