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謝謝教主評論，關於教主的疑惑，因為敘事性的方式，所以教主疑惑的解答都在後面的篇章陸續出現ouo
這部的定調是文學奇幻小說，走的風格會比較慢，分支也會比較龐大、零碎，加上意識流的緣故，會較常出現比喻或是聯想的句式，營造情境。
跟一般主流小說，開場三回定生死有所區別，我完全可以理解教主覺得很困惑的點ouo
也感謝教主撥攏時間，閱讀一部分不才之作，並提供了許多修改意見，之後會將此建議納入修稿的考量。

再次感謝ouo/
11 months agoReply
killer
謝謝您不嫌棄教主的一點意見
11 months agoReply
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