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寫的不錯，建議多加證據及如何查出被害人水銀中毒現象~不單單靠讀心也要具體證明，如被害人水銀中毒嘴巴有金屬味道之類的。
9 years agoReply
櫻婷美奈
謝謝你的提醒！我會改進的！
9 years agoReply
芝麻小柴
你好你好~
不會 其實還不錯 只是我也在猶豫該選誰呢~
就算沒被選到也別太失望喔~XD
9 years agoReply
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