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七日夏
蠱！還有各種以毒攻毒的戰鬥感覺很新穎

但個人感覺沒有那種百密一疏緊張和臨場感，這應該是可惜的地方
9 years agoReply
浮火
謝謝你的意見喔 :) 可能我比較不擅長寫打鬥場面。會在琢磨看看的 :)
9 years agoReply
七日夏
@浮火  淺見而已  也不是說我說的一定對
9 years agoReply
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