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Not bad. Some really great descriptions in this. I really like that you don't rely on adverbs, and instead use more active verbs. It makes your writing have more flow and action. Very well done! :)
3 years agoReply
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thank you. it was a good vignette.
thank you for noticing the inner mechanics.
flow and action of a sports car, lol.
wish i could continue but this was strictly contest.
3 years agoReply
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