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社恐新人
感謝前輩的建議。我會盡力改的！之所以沒有介紹設定是因為我不想序章寫說明書。之後的章節內容會有補充的，希望我有能力做到。
至於你說的標點符號我也這樣認為，我也會盡力看多一點書！希望之後的章節，我能夠成功改善自己的文筆。感謝你的鼓勵！

2 months agoReply
鮪魚壽司
對於網文而言先講清楚世界觀是加分項，不然前期讀者一臉蒙可能會導致棄文哦～
2 months agoReply
鮪魚壽司
@社恐新人
2 months agoReply
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