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小魚一尾
這篇詩我居然沒看懂(´;ω;`)
1 year agoReply
W.H.
哈哈哈～簡言之，就是四個字：

「志大才疏」。

注意最後三句，「蚯蚓」和「錦蛇」的對比～

對了，這裡的「現實」是擬人化，「挫折」是實體化，將抽象名詞當成人、物來寫，是新詩創作的一種手法。
1 year agoReply
小魚一尾
@W.H.,看懂了，跑回去寫我的第二篇小說，希望我不要變成這四個字的代名詞（躺
1 year agoReply
W.H.
@小魚一尾,有自覺，就可以避免～

知道自己不足，才有進步的可能，也才有可能進步💪！！
1 year agoReply
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