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甘太郎
還有這個故事之後都是圍繞愛的故事。 你有時間再看看後邊更精彩呢。
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
好的～
3 months agoReply
甘太郎
還有那一句的意思是溫泉老闆把廢物運送到垃圾場的意思。我剛剛已經改好了。你有時間再去看看吧。謝謝你衷心感謝你給出的意見。😉🙏
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
懂了～謝謝解釋☆⌒(*^-゜)v
3 months agoReply
甘太郎
首先，很感謝你吧感覺直接寫出來。和我一起分享。
對的，有一些你給我一點時間吧。讓我把那一些粵語的內容改一改很快一改好立刻跟你說😉希望能讓大家都看得明白。 你們看得不舒服的地方嘅定要跟我說清楚。 這樣我才能把不好的地方把我的作品更加改進。 謝謝你們的建議😄🤝
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
也希望我的建議有幫助到你～謝謝參加！
但如果寫文習慣用粵語,不用改也沒關係啊,不同語言之間本來就會有所差異,用得習慣寫出來的文章才會比較好！加油～
3 months agoReply
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