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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
過去看某幾個故事，也有這種情況，我想借機會說說。

這種起首，我都是覺得似「序」多於故事的「起」，是中/長篇的起首也說得通，但短篇故事來說... ...

可能是我閱歷太淺，想想這個故事，加上最後三個部份，最多7000字的短篇，但有1000字在說「背景/序」的內容，感覺會是重頭輕尾，多數到中後段時也草草帶過，很難會令讀者覺得滿意。

不過說實話，都要看你未來三回如何發展... ...
5 years agoReply
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