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七分熟
首先，非常感謝大大的書評與建議~

關於女主因為無法刪掉遊戲，然後會乖乖去擺攤部分，並不是完全沒有心理過程。第一章已經提到，她正處於失業狀態，而不擺攤(任務失敗)也會讓她的生活陷入更深的困境。既然無法刪除遊戲，攤車又在眼前，任務完成後還能獲得維持生計的獎勵，對低谷中的她來說，這何嘗不是一種可行的選擇呢？


當然，如果讀者沒有感受到，那確實是作者的問題。(>_<)
6 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
我知道你有寫這段
但是「信服度」不足
因為女主角怎麼確定獎勵和懲罰是真的
遊戲停運了又突然運營
還送來餐車？？？
正常人反應肯定會覺得
這種不合理的事情高機率有鬼
都已經失業了若再被詐騙豈不是完了🤣
6 months agoReply
七分熟
@朝晞Ashinari ,好的~会改进这方面的反应
6 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
@七分熟,謝謝你參與活動喔☺️
6 months agoReply
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