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蹦蹦騎士
掙扎後跨出第一步，偶像的興趣逐漸融入米樂的言行，慢慢變成鼓舞軍人們的象徵。然後與第一軍用機器人理念衝突，第一軍用機器人看他不爽，但礙於系統還不會直接攻擊，心中卻也逐漸被感動，在米樂用音樂與舞蹈試圖感化敵人被擊中時安撫了想要回歸使用武器的米樂，反而鼓勵他繼續。最後來個華麗演出和全體打扣，迎來全新的和平。

這個發展我熟。

扯遠了，我喜歡這個概念，但是軍用機器人的內心戲可能需要琢磨琢磨，可惜創挑只能投兩篇改寫，不燃大家的創意都滿有意思的。
3 years agoReply
百劫人間
哈哈這和我原本想的發展其實不一樣，只有第一句有符合我本來想的劇情wwwww不過如果我的大綱有幸被版版選中的話，我也很期待看到您的詮釋與闡述方式哦www
3 years agoReply
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