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嵐斕
@星無繁
1 year agoReply
星無繁
感謝評論！關於其他角色性格描寫的部分，的確着墨不足🙂‍↕️會改善一下💪🏻(但劇情過度聚焦於主角是故意為之噢～)

患癌的部分呢，因為作者沒有親身經歷過，設定不夠嚴謹，很抱歉🥲不過關於監護人的部份，後面有提及😉如果有興趣可以看看！😁

文筆不算成熟，請多多指點！☺️

P.S.新增的情節感覺不錯，可以參考一下(不是抄襲🙈)
1 year agoReply
嵐斕
@星無繁,⛽⛽
1 year agoReply
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